The Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) has delayed requiring power plants, and other industrial sites to get a permit for greenhouse gas pollution. Carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases contribute to global warming, and threaten the welfare of mankind. The delay should help the government and facilities prepare themselves for the future cutbacks and regulation of greenhouse pollution.
New York Times-
http://www.nytimes.com/2010/03/30/science/earth/30emissions.html?ref=science
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