Nearly 30 million Americans suffer from migraines which are severe, recurring headaches that may occur along with symptoms of light sensitivity, nausea or weakness. However, those who don’t suffer from them often underestimate their disabling effect. Fortunately, there are a variety of treatments available to help cut back on the pain, and the number of occurrences.
- New York Times
http://well.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/12/15/the-voices-of-migraine/
Grade: 8.5/10
ReplyDelete• There should be a comma after migraines in the first sentence.
• "Those who don't suffer from them often underestimate their disabling effect" according to who?
• "Fortunate" according to who? This statement should have been attributed.